Studio brief 4: Final critique

description of newspaper

The final critique allowed for feedback on the final outcome and comments in which can inform our evaluation. 

Feedback
- text on the green page is a little hard to read, widen the columns slightly
- make sure text fills the boxes so it looks consistent
- "the name 'aduting' sounds a bit cheeky", maybe change to #adultlife
- subtle use of colour highlights a mature design style, suitable for the target audience